Days

Days

A Poem by Jeff

It's been 10 days

Since I last saw you


It's been 12 days

Since I first held you


To me it's been a lifetime

I'm ready to hold you again


I know someday

We'll see each other again


But these hours

Feel like days


It's been 10 days

Since I felt your lips


It's been 12 days

Since we first kissed


Too many days without you

Not enough moments with you


I'll fight to bring you

Back to my arms



© 2011 Jeff


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love opens our hearts in an instant and this write beautifully expresses the need to keep loving beyond the counting of days...heartfelt.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love it... i feel your strain through this.. loss and yearn... counting down the days...


Posted 13 Years Ago


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I agree with Serah, don't find many men with a heart like that. wow
This is just amazing, great poem, great lyrics.
Loved every word.


Posted 13 Years Ago


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. you're writing the most magical love songs ever, jeff ... the entire series, (especially the last few poems) is absolutely mesmerizing and amazing ... no one could write so beautifully ... so consistently ... if they didn't have a beautiful heart ... you are a golden hearted poet ...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 26, 2011
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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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