Lonely Without You

Lonely Without You

A Poem by Jeff

Day in, Day out

These people float by me

I'm going through the motions

Until I can see your face again


Surrounded by people

But I'm all alone

Without you by my side

I keep going forward

Until I can feel you in my arms again


Another winter day

The cold reaches the bone

All I want to feel

Is your body close to me

And your kiss on my lips

© 2011 Jeff


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. absolutely beautiful, dear jeff ... you wear your heart on your sleeve ... and it's absolutely amazing and awesome ... that you do it with such simplicity is always inspiring and remarkable ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I was moved by this poem of yours Jeff..in particular with the first two stanzas.It gave the feeling that how we can be so alone even in a crowd without that loved one whose love may snugly fit us into a little world with just us both.You capture the musings of heart very well and without any pretension.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is that bittersweet feeling that curls up like a cat next to your heart...that feeling of weariness without being weary...resignation maybe...wanting someone there in that instant...knowing you're going to have exercise some patience...and it's running in circles like a crazed gerbil...can very much relate

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow that was really really good and I know exactly how that feels it's like my exact thoughts in your poem.amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is sad to me, simple but kinda romantic and really good.
Liked it alot. Lonely person waiting for the one he loves to come back to his arms. Love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Don't really know why, but this one just broke my heart....

Posted 13 Years Ago


very soft creative little peace :) thumbs up

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was cute, flirty, sad, and amazing all at once. i loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cute, simply and very romanic! nice one honey!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Jeff

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