Black Is Blue

I don't want to feel

My insides are bleeding

Too many wounds

It's easier to fall

Rather than fall

Too much pain

I can feel

The pain within

Too much love

I wish I could

Not touch my soul

Not enough protection

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

I WAS INTERESTED...
JUST BY THE...
TITILE STRONG WORDS...
THANKS FOR SHARING...

[?]

wow, oh how I can relate, this was right on.
Just great, beautiful
Great read

[Dische]

This may not be the best review but I think that was really good and hard to understand but I understood. You are a really really good writer!

[.]

. brutally beautiful, dear jeff ... it is indeed excruciating to deal with so much intensity of love ... it is consuming ... and if we let go ... then sometimes destructive too ... exceptionally well expressed with simplicity and skill ...

[InkSlinger]

I have often wondered if being a writer has helped me with the "feeling" aspect of my life.. as a writer we examine everything little emotion, we look at thing with a different perspective, seeing things others do not.. that being said.. we still feel the same pain, the same hurt and tears, and yet, we somehow understand how to pen them so help others with what we feel..

[sarah]

Man can I realte to this poem great great work this is written so well!!

[Norma M Sutton]

I like the short choppy lines in this one. They add to the feel of the poem.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great expressed feelings in your poem here, Sometimes a lot of people wish they could turn their feelings off, not to feel at all, but feeling is life and we have to try some way to feel and get passed the pain! great write.

[Ruth]

There is always a consequence to love, or any feeling, sometimes better to have not felt lol Beautifully written love
xx

[Stef Outsiders]

When were hurting, a lot of us wish we could not feel but we do...
I really felt this piece... I hope someone finds a needle and thread and close those wounds, seal that bleeding...
good work!