I Believe

I Believe

A Poem by Jeff

When you're down

I'll lift you from the ground


When you're high

I'll be your sky


I believe in you

You believe in me

I never knew someone like you

Could touch me so deeply


I believe in God above

I believe in our love


You healed my broken heart

Encased me in your heart


I let go of the broken heart

I believe in our miracle

I welcome a new start

On our path to the spiritual



© 2011 Jeff


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THIS IS VERY GOOD...
I LIKE THE FIRST...
FOUR LINES THE MOST...
GOOD JOB JEFF...

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is a glorious hope that flows through your words, for love and life and every day to come... I needed something to inspire me, and your words worked perfectly...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderfully written :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


awww this is so stunning! and wonderful! keep up the great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww love it! crafted beautifully...

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like the flow, it portrays a spiritual dimension to love... lovely!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was so romantic and beauitful al rolled up into one outstanding read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is a classic hero saving the damsel in distress - borderline love story

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. ohhhhhh ... this is absolutely perfection personified ... my gosh the simplicity and precision yet profundity in this poem is absolutely astonishing ... it's like the blue print of a religion, jeff ... one of your best ... without a doubt ... definitely in your top 10, if not top 5 ... skillful and sensitive beyond measure ... and the last four lines especially ... and the last line ... and the last word ... especially ... truly, this is "spiritual" ... all that people usually say about it and all the jargon they use ... to say all that they say is redundant in front of this message of love ... spectacular poetry ...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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