Spiritual Dance

I'll let your imaginations go with this one.

Breathe me in

Take my essence

Into your soul

Absorb my being

Within your temple

Let me circulate

Through your emotions

And play with your soul

Stimulate my processes

Connect with me

On a higher plane of existence

Let us glide amongst the clouds

Soar with the birds

Reach out and touch the stars

Explode within a supernova

Explore until we drain

Ourselves of spirit

Return to our bodies

To refill our energy

Author's Note

This is a perfect example of beginning with an idea and having it run off into a completely different direction.

Reviews

[kuru]

very nice...you let your mind expand with this one a spiritual journey

[Black Cat Fever]

Its quite grand in scope and beautiful in imagery. I took it as lovers coming together and connecting on all the levels that are possible. This is excellent.

[AlieahRose]

I REALLY LIKE THIS...
YOUR WRITTING IS LIKE...
A BREATH OF FRESH AIR...

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. ah, absolutely ravishing poetry ... it's like a cosmic journey ... a celebration of freedom and togetherness ... beautifully written ...

[InkSlinger]

Someone has it bad.. love is in the air, so breath it in my friend... Nicely composed!

[Liza]

you seem to prefer writing about the element of air - it cannot be measured but felt....this writing has a nice soothing flow.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Heavenly...to me this is the perfect union of two people...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

WOW! I liked the way you went with this one! What a dance! I had to read it twice, because i liked it so much!

[Ashley]

wow i love this! i can feel a dance 100/100