Wish You Were Here

I hear your voice

I can't feel your touch

I hear you breathe

I can't feel the warmth

So far away

So far away from me

We're just two souls

Striving for the same life

With someone miles away

I wish

I wish you were here

Two souls

Being pulled together

Like magnets

While the world spins around us

So far away

So far away from me

Your smile exists in my mind

Your scent is a mystery

I fantasize you laying next to me

I dream of your kiss in the morning

I wish

I wish you were here

Walking through my door

Sitting with me

As we relax in the evening

Being the couple

We want to be

Reviews

[Ruth]

Sometimes we need to hold onto the dream!
xx

[AlieahRose]

IT IS SUCH A CONTRADICTION...
IN THE BEGINING...
BUT...
I GET IT...
I LIKE THIS...
NICE JOB JEFF...

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. beautifully poignant and poetic, jeff ... and the perfect ode to "wish you were here" ... em and i absolutely love the track and are die hard pink floyd fans ...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent write, yearning for that person, that's so for away! you expressed it so well!

[InkSlinger]

Nice job Jeff... the perfect longing for that certain person. Well told story..

[Ashley]

aww thats really cute! i enjoy this piece a lot. 100/100

[Sports Girl]

I liked it a lot. We all strive and think about what kind of couple we wanna be with the person we wish to be with. It's not always easy to achieve that, which is why we wish on those things. Nicely done, a beautiful poem.