If You Knew

Are you thinking of me

You're on my mind

Do you feel my arms around you

I feel you now

If I could promise you

I'd hold you forever

Would you come to me

If I swore to you

My undying love

Would you take my hand

I'd sacrifice my heart

For your kiss

I'd offer up my soul

For your love

Breathe into me

Bring your love into me

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Very well written love poem. Keep up the good work

[Cherrie Palmer]

good flow and very lovely :) with a relaxed rhyme that was not over done

[Stef Outsiders]

so sensual and loving.. well done!

[Christie Moses]

a beautiful and soft sensuality in this one :)

[Nobody.]

nice sensual piece. enjoyed.

[AlieahRose]

THIS IS GOOD...
I LIKE IT ALOT...

[Liza]

intense and sensual; wanting and needing without seeming needy; romantic.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh so love infused...and adorable...

[InkSlinger]

Love so close, yet so far away.. what would one do, to taste those lips..
To feel love pass by the lips, and filling the lungs with hope..
The sentiment is beautifully written, so few words, but they tell the story of a lifetime.. Well Done Jeff

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Well written poem! A love poem that flows with love!