Questions

Questions

A Poem by Jeff

Do you hear the sound

The sound of

My heart breaking


Do you feel the warmth

The warmth of

My blood spilling


Will you still think of me

Like you think of me

When we were together


Will you still see me

As you saw me

For our time together


Will you someday

Think of me

And what could have been


© 2010 Jeff


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. they always do, jeff ... except not as soon as us ... this is the sensitive person's heart and song in a poem ... it's overwhelming and poignant beyond measure and i sing it with you ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Those painful feelings of longing. I know they hurt. Nicely done as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem, It's hard giving up someone you care about, you wonder if they know what they lost and could have gained!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 23, 2010
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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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