Tonight

Tonight

We have you and me

No others in sight

Two souls too lonely

To miss this chance

To lose each other

In our lonely dance

As the candles flicker

You're the only one

In my eyes tonight

I'm the only one

In your eyes tonight

We could be wrong

But this feels right

Here is where we belong

Tonight

Reviews

[Tomi]

nice one!

[kuru]

good job on this it has a nice feel to it, a kind of isolated but togetherness feeling

[Sports Girl]

I love how its basically about living in the moment with the one you love. great job

[Emotionally Blank yet F..]

I love it! It's not promising a future, but it's a promising present. It's right here right now. I love it

[AlieahRose]

THIS IS PRETTY...
IT IS ONE OF THOSE...
RIGHT NOW POEMS...
LOVE THOSE KIND...
AND I LOVE THIS...
JOB WELL DONE...

[Cynthia]

So cute! Hw sweet this situation is!
I hope one day if I can do the same with my future bf if I have, awwwww, so romantic!
Nice work!

[InkSlinger]

I love simplicity.. no words to clutter up the moment.. sometimes love is direct and to the point.. you captured one of those moments with this one.. Well done Jeff!

[Norma M Sutton]

A sentimental sort of love poem. It's nice.

[Ashley]

awww its cute

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So romantic and wrote with brilliant feelings!