It's A Mess
A Poem by
Jeff
These days
Life isn't pretty
Life isn't easy
I drive myself
Insane with worry
For my boy
Is he doing alright
Is he getting the care
That he needs
Attorneys
Legal matters
I don't understand
Child support
More money
I don't have
Because she
Didn't want me
Leaving her for another
I didn't have
© 2010 Jeff
Author's Note
I don't like the title.
Reviews
It is a great peice though, to many people take advantage of the whlole childsupport thing, more parents should be thinking of the child, not the extra paycheck from there ex. Good topic
Posted 14 Years Ago
An overwhelming whirl of madness that burns....as it wrenches tears and causes sighs and worry..but...You Are Stronger than You may know...
Posted 14 Years Ago
An overwhelming whirl of madness that burns....as it wrenches tears and causes sighs and worry..but...You Are Stronger than You may know...
The ails of adulthood, I see. How ailing they really are.
Posted 14 Years Ago
The ails of adulthood, I see. How ailing they really are.
I like this short poem, its to the point. if you dont like the tittle, change it to Money Mess, or something else. overall its good
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like this short poem, its to the point. if you dont like the tittle, change it to Money Mess, or something else. overall its good
Such an overwhelming feel.. just took the breath out of me. The anxieties, the pain, the wondering... Life can often hit us right between the eyes.. can be so unkind...
Posted 14 Years Ago
Such an overwhelming feel.. just took the breath out of me. The anxieties, the pain, the wondering... Life can often hit us right between the eyes.. can be so unkind...
. it's much too much ... and chaotic ... i find myself in a different kind of chaos ... there's no way but to brave it out ...
Posted 14 Years Ago
. it's much too much ... and chaotic ... i find myself in a different kind of chaos ... there's no way but to brave it out ...
I like the it!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like the it!
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Added on October 19, 2010
Last Updated on October 19, 2010
Author
Jeff Ankeny, IA
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I'm old and I'm the most awesome person ever! I'm not serious at all about that. I got married last year to a wonderful woman who is the most beautiful woman in the world.
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