Mercy on My Soul

Mercy on My Soul

A Poem by Jeff

The Angel, The Jinn, and The Beast within.

Fighting to take control of my soul.

Demons arise to overwhelm me.

Force the evil to the front.

The sins are heavy on my shoulders.

Lord Have Mercy on Me

The Angel, The Jinn, and The Beast Within

Whisper you're going to die.

The Jinn says soon.

The Angel says not yet.

And The Beast just laughs.

Lord Have Mercy on Me

© 2010 Jeff


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. brilliant job of expressing the dimensions of existing in a painful predicament ... i've felt that so many times ... but could never have expressed it with such few words and so powerfully ... i'm actually thinking that you might want to consider writing a series ... called ... the angel, the jinn and the beast within ... would be brilliant ... and i'd definitely want a copy of that book ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it beautiful well written! Just one thing...what song gave you this inspiration? lol I like it though wonderful glad you wrote it even more glad you shared it!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Jeff
Jeff

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