Friend

Friend

A Poem by Jeff
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A poem about a friend.

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Touch my heart

Feel my pain

And tell me I'm not insane


My broken heart

Will never mend

Right now I need a friend


My soul aches

Be my friend, Be my lover

My heart's a bleeder


I've been busted and bruised

Loved and used

But I'm unstoppable


I'm being torn apart

By this pain in my heart

I'm falling down


Wrap your arm in mine

Tell me I'll be fine

Help this lost soul


© 2010 Jeff


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wow this is a word crafters dream of desire, amazing flow and simplicity
that speaks of romance and the causes- a bid to rid the heart of its pain-
a lover to overshadow the loney night is the artistic impression i get
when i read the image in its perfect phrasing whole, the simplicity is
brilliant and the desire is a never ending seach, magnificently rendered


Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww i will be your friend, i need a friend too! hello new friend. i will buy you a candy bar. 100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written, I loved the meaning in this

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, friends are irreplaceable.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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