Windows To Your Soul

Windows To Your Soul

A Poem by Jeff

Eyes are the window to the soul


Here you can not hide


What's on the inside


The cold blue do not reflect


The words that come out of your mouth


The same light doesn't shine


As it did once upon a time


When you were mine


Even when you mention him


Your eyes don't light up


Like they should


Or maybe it's just with me


Looking too deeply


Into your soul


And seeing your new feelings for me



© 2010 Jeff


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a nice piece. is this a romance reborn? or just wishful thinking.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. you're so observant ... those are accurate and precise observations in an exquisite piece of poetry that resounds ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


THIS SOUNDS LIKE A VERSE IN A SONG...
I AM ALSO A MUSIC WRITER...
JOB WELL DONE...

Posted 14 Years Ago


i really like it, and the way its in the center

Posted 14 Years Ago


maybe we should just coast along, not bothering to look to deeply.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A wonderful piece! Honest..relatable...looking into the soul...a beautiful image!

Posted 14 Years Ago


The eyes are the window to many things!
Greatly portrayed here!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


its a sad appreciated look isnt it. i know

Posted 14 Years Ago


Your mouth needs not telling me what your eyes already told me...

Great poem about a new kindling romance.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love the way you open this poem, eyes are the window to the soul and
all that encopasses a spirited outlook, this poem has a tinge of hope
set along a skyline of heartbreak, and the reader can feel each word,
cut to the bone. it is a questing of life and love and happiness.
when all seems bleak, aexcellent job on this!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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