Deep

7 breathes to life

Eternal

7 touches to skin

Reaction

7 glances from the eyes

Attraction

I need you like I need air

Emotions flow between us

Sex is a heavenly action

A chemical reaction

Within our skin

Great love takes time

Sex shapes our body

Emotions shape our mind

Our souls entwine as one

If I can't give myself to you

Then none shall it be

I want to give it all to you

I want to take you within my self

Mind, body, and soul

Reviews

[AYVID N]

This is a truly maginificent write on the spiritual oneness felt along with physical union of two souls. I really and truly appreciate the depth of emotion that has gone into penning this beautiful truth of love and life. Keep writing sir, you are an amazing poet!

[Jack...]

Very cool my friend. now this is what you write to get someone's attention.

[Jeff]

Thank you!

[Dhaye]

So passionate. Indeed to love is to give your whole self - mind body and soul.

Nice piece! Keep writing.

[ms. barrie]

This is electrifying in it's passion, I see this (my interpretation could be wrong);
As one starting out as being infactuated with someone *second stanza*
Then reaching the climax of expressing actual love.

I love the original use in your choice of words (sevens) and the imagery, meter
You conveyed in this write. Brilliant write, thanks for sharing :)

[Antoñyo]

Excellent expression of heart, mind and body.

Thanks for sharing

[Sunni Davis]

So emotional and passionate. Very deep indeed. Its beautifully written.

[Jeff]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

"Great love takes time

Sex shapes our body

Emotions shape our mind

Our souls entwine as one




If I can't give myself to you"

Glad to see you write and post great poetry...:)

[zainul]

Very nice realization indeed :)
Well penned.

[Jeff]

Thank you!

[zainul]

You are most welcome :)

[Renée]

Lovely Thoughts !