Deep

7 breathes to life

Eternal

7 touches to skin

Reaction

7 glances from the eyes

Attraction

I need you like I need air

Emotions flow between us

Sex is a heavenly action

A chemical reaction

Within our skin

Great love takes time

Sex shapes our body

Emotions shape our mind

Our souls entwine as one

If I can't give myself to you

Then none shall it be

I want to give it all to you

I want to take you within my self

Mind, body, and soul

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

deep love in more ways than one...i wanted to read the first line with "breaths" but i may be reading that line incorrectly...

but i like the use of 777---and heavenly...with its link to perfect love---mental and emotional as well as physical.

j.

[Ruth]

This is magical and insightful...truly a masterpiece...love is an art...as shown here...

[Usman Muhammad]

Too romantic,
First stanza was very impressive. The flow of the poem is good too.Liked the theme of your poem
Well written.

[Balance]

Very romantic and passionate

[I am that I am]

This is deep; as the title suggests. Total connection of mind, body, and soul. It's worded very well and expresses that connection deeply. It also seems quite catchy. Is it by chance song lyrics? Either way, well done Jeff.

[emmajoy]

' Great love takes time.. '

Such a blissful poem, obviously as sincere as your Bio. How wonderful to love like that in both reality and words.

[Blue]

Utterly beautiful write with just enough dose of sensuality and romance.

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:: a very beautiful piece... it's all heart and all art...

[Jeff]

Thank you!

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:: you're very welcome, monsieur...

[R. L. Hill]

Really beautiful work. Makes me want to experience that sense of love.

[AYVID N]

This is a truly maginificent write on the spiritual oneness felt along with physical union of two souls. I really and truly appreciate the depth of emotion that has gone into penning this beautiful truth of love and life. Keep writing sir, you are an amazing poet!