Valley of the Jinns

In the Valley of the Jinns

It's struggle to escape

Their whispers

Tempt even the strongest of souls

They see within our souls

They know our fears

They know what to say

It's hard to tell

If it's the Jinns

Or your ego

In your head

Reviews

[AYVID N]

We are our egos, our heads! The strongest of us. The Valley of the Jinns lies inside our minds!

[YouoweYoupay]

I agree with clever! It's sometimes easier to blame the supernatural including fate, charms or whatnot for our misfortunes or troubles. Brief but sprinkled with the scent of rainy deserts and mystery of caverns. Keep writing!

-youoweyoupay

[Jeff]

Thank you very much!!!

[Jessie]

This is clever! Well done sir :)

[Jeff]

Thank you!