Never-ending War

Beyond the light

Beyond the dark

Beyond the understandings of an outer world

Beyond the clarity of the inner self

I've been perplexed and misunderstood

Battled Jinns

Slayed the demons

I've walked a million miles

To get away from you

Yet you're still behind me

Reviews

[AYVID N]

"Yet you're still behind me"
.... And also within me!

I relate to this utterly meaningful poem in my own personal way!
My favourite in all your writings!

[Lucien Maier]

Haunting, great word play.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

I like it , So realistic , You could express all what you faced because of this shadow in a few lines , and you nailed it :)

[.]

~ beautifully expressed...

~ i've experienced this a lot... it's truly a "never-ending war"...

[PP]

Shadow..is it??

[Jeff]

It's that dark shadow that never seems to go away.

[PP]

Indeed! Even in dark you can still feel it :)

[Jeff]

That's very true. Though it does give me something to write about.

[PP]

hahaha..you better be giving credits to me!

[Jeff]

But of course! :)

[PP]

haha..:)