Sonnet 10 (Shakespearean Style)

Baby, there’s something I want you to know

What I want you to know is I love you,

Ev’rything about you from head to toe

I hope ‘tis something you already knew.

Alas, I am in love with who you are

Hark! I do not need you to change for me

For you are already my fair, bright star

You’re already who I want you to be.

But, I do know you have a history

But they were only the first few pages

I know we’ll have a better love story

I shall always love thee through the ages.

  I cannot help my own self from grinning,

  For I know ‘tis only the beginning!

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Except for the modern way of speaking, I think it's very much a Shakespeare style. Your words are touching and comforting, certainly can melt a girl's heart. Nice Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[The Water Queen]

Beautiful and profound write. I think Im starting to like sonnets.
Great write.

[Hailey]

good flow and sincere, it was a very good and well written poem as usual, so good job on it :P

[Tina Kline]

Another very impressive Shakespearean Sonnet! I really did enjoy reading this. You do do these very well.

[deeps]

This is quite the profound write here. I really enjoyed this.

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a lifting write that exalts in love and its profound beauty. I thought the notion of personal history being only a few pages was excellent... more to be written!

[Tate Morgan]

This sonnet is nice Dont take this wrong But lacking the other words that would be spoken in a Shakespearean sonnet I think it would be better to omit Thees and Thous here

[Aussie]

Haha,I liked this one! I liked that you used 'hark',for some reason that made me smile.This was very cute,well written,and flowed very nicely.Wonderful work(: