Septem Versus 5

This is a new style of poetry I developed, called "Septem Versus".

Alas, I can't sleep

For I want to weep;

I truly miss thee

You aren't next to me

You are my future

"Us" shall always be

Of this I am sure.

Author's Note

I created this new style of poetry when I was thinking about sonnets and how the 10 syllables and 14 lines are supposed to create a square. So I decided to try out 7 lines with 5 syllables with the rhyme scheme A-A-B-B-C-B-C. I call it "Septem Versus" because that means seven lines in latin.

Reviews

[deeps]

This one is awesome,
love the rhyme scehme and flow.