You Little Devil

You Little Devil

A Poem by Jeff Miller
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My first poem directed at my crazy ex-girlfriend who is stalking me and my betrothed girlfriend

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You are impish

You shall NOT touch my cherubin

You are selfish

You are not esteemed, not even by your kin

You are a malady upon society

Verily I speak to you, I do not jest

Your words are scurrility

So I entreaty you, save yourself from my tempest

Your words challenge my sanguine nature

They are spoken in superfluities

It shall not be long until a sheriff shall be sent to capture,

The likes of you, he shall not send his deputy to complete his duty

You little devil

You have committed treachery on mankind

In hell, you shall freeze in the ninth level

You do not possess a human’s mind

The wires are not connected right in your brain

I think you are crazy

I’m not even sure if you are even sane

Your lies are spoken in a sundry variety

These facts are well known, forsooth

You stalk us like prey

You do not act as a sleuth

I question whether you wish to start a fray

But you are not worth the time

I’m not sure if you have any value

So I shall be quieter than a mime

I do not want to stress and waste my time over the likes of you

You are in my past

So just leave the memories where they lay

I beg you do not make me feel trapped

Because if you corner me, you sin-stained demon, it will be you I slay

Immediately stop these acts of atrocity

And hide your monstrosity

If this will cease

Our worlds shall live in peace

© 2010 Jeff Miller


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Wow.. now this is pretty intense! You have an EX that has commited treachery on mankind? That is mysterious and jolting.. a sin-stained demon?!!! You have some pretty intense feelings towards another that says maybe you should keep your distance!!! They most likely want to destroy what you have (I have dealt with that more than once) and are filled with jealousy? Just some guesses.. though usually issues are a two-way street.. I can not sense that here.. just one side. The outpouring is intense.. hopefully you get your peace!


Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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The flow sounds better compared to the second poem you’ve written for the same purpose. The emotions are so powerful it’s literally emotions translated into words. Some lines are way too exaggerated though, but other than that, the expressiveness and aggressiveness are deeply felt.

Keep Writing. ^___^


Posted 13 Years Ago


psycho c**t

Posted 14 Years Ago


hahahahahahaha crazy lady... :(--

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

in some ways this poem has confused me but in other ways this peom has showed me that little devils are mentally insane and they choose to be this way and shower our world with it. Amzaing read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very intense writing. I'm not sure what she has done, but she seems crazy. Hopefully she will disappear.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful read here. I like this alot. It gripped and pulled at my attention span. Very well written. Such an enjoyable read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow you must be pretty angry at her lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gripping write, filled with the anxiety, anger, and all associated with such a painful situation... You bring a depth to your words and fill them with emotion that stuns. Amazing write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Another very well written poem about the frustrations of an Ex who won't leave you alone. I think you did a wonderful job on this one too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. now this is pretty intense! You have an EX that has commited treachery on mankind? That is mysterious and jolting.. a sin-stained demon?!!! You have some pretty intense feelings towards another that says maybe you should keep your distance!!! They most likely want to destroy what you have (I have dealt with that more than once) and are filled with jealousy? Just some guesses.. though usually issues are a two-way street.. I can not sense that here.. just one side. The outpouring is intense.. hopefully you get your peace!


Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 23, 2010
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Jeff Miller
Jeff Miller

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I'm 23 years old, married to Sarah for 3 years, and have one puppy. We just had our first angel, Audrey. I love literature and music. My wife was my biggest inspiration, the reason for over 100 pieces.. more..

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