Groundhog Day

This assignment was given to us after we watched the movie 'Groundhog Day' with Bill Murray. I don't think this one is particularly good

Imagine a life of previous continuation

In which, you never will see new creation

You will not gain any experience

Your life would be an eternal moment in which you reminisce

You relive every twinge of pain

And you realize there is no longer anything to gain

You relive every moment

With no consequence to your dissent

BUT

You feel all your old joy

Relive all the moments where nothing could annoy

You, because you were in the best mood

And from your face a smile protrudes

You get to always be with the one you love

Never worry about them being sent to heaven above

Yes, everything would be familiar

But nothing again would be peculiar

Your outlook on life would be changed

All your priorities would be rearranged

Maybe change some of your mistakes

And let good deeds replace

All the moments your will was weak

With moments you weren’t scared to speak

So…would this really be a curse?

Since you and your loved ones would never ride in a hearse?

Reviews

[Sarah]

i love that movie

[The Water Queen]

Sounds like the giver

[deeps]

I think this is a wonderful write here.

[Comatose]

I like it! ^^ lol, it's alot better than my Groundhog Day assignment. ^^

[Troll]

JIZZ IN MY PANTS