Sarah Sonnet 2

Sitting beside you in class

Every word, every action, tempts me

These strong urges do harass

Harass my mind, I need to flee

Before I give in

Before I immerse us in bliss

Before my thoughts turn in to sin

Before I lean in and steal your kiss

I typically have good self control

But without you, something is missing

Only around you is my heart whole

You, and your love, is a dream; no longer am I wishing

Wishing you to be mine

Maybe I should be submissive, and give in to the sublime

Reviews

[Sarah]

hell yes

[Sarah]

i like how my names in it :D

[Deepshikha]

You're really good at the love poem, I must say. So far, this has to be my favorite.

[Tina Kline]

Very nice write about wanting and desire and wondering if you should give into temptation. This is a really great piece. Love it too!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Beautifully written.. and you just know it has to be real love when a guy is willing to submit to a girl! Nothing wrong with that at all.. you even raise her to be "sublime".. which don't we really feel deep down that way about someone new! I loved the flow and honesty.. just remember to be strong when she needs that.. but knowing when to be submissive.. it a very attractive quality... gives a girl the sense of equality even if life is not always equal. Great work!

[deeps]

This is wonderful, i like this

[Sarah]

awe :D I HAVE THE PAPER COPY HAHAHAAHA!