Txt Message 8

Txt Message 8

A by Jeff Miller
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This is the last of my current txt message series lol

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Why you gotta be so beautiful

Why you gotta light up my world

Why you gotta be my favorite girl?

It's so hard without you here

Can hardly stand to look in my mirror

I need you

I want you

Fill the whole in my heart

Make my heart whole

I'll give you the world

You just gotta do your part

Say yes and we can see what's in store

Together we can explore

© 2009 Jeff Miller


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awe :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is an interesting piece with a good rhythm to it. I liked it a lot. Good job on this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such lovely rhythm x

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 19, 2009

Author

Jeff Miller
Jeff Miller

Boise, ID



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I'm 23 years old, married to Sarah for 3 years, and have one puppy. We just had our first angel, Audrey. I love literature and music. My wife was my biggest inspiration, the reason for over 100 pieces.. more..

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