An Informal Sonnet

A sonnet does not have to follow Shakespeare's method or other poets. The only consistent thing among sonnets are 14 lines. This is not going to be my layout for sonnets, so I declare this to be an informal sonnet.

 

Everything that is

Everything that was

None of it compares to you

Everyone looks at you and observes a girl

But my eyes see an angel

A perfect angel

You’re my world wonder

To others there are the Pyramids

But I just see you…period

You belong with me

Hopefully, soon you shall see

That we would make the perfect pair

Forever, I promise to care

So, Beautiful, please be mine

Reviews

[Alicia™]

This is so sweet!

[Sarah]

i love you

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Now this one is full of yearning and love.. pleading for the love of another in such a romantic writing. Whether formal sonnet or informal.. this one touches deeply.. words like "you belong with me Hopefully, soon you shall see". Simple yet so full of meaning to the one it's intended for.. I'm sure she will be thrilled by this! Great Job .. keep it up!

[Mistaken]

AWw that is so sweet!! It is amazing Jeff!

[deeps]

This is just so beautiful and amazing!
Like this write alot. Very well written

[Sheila Kline]

Oh I feel the depth of emotion you are feeling for this person, and your format is just fine with me...I just love your "informal sonnet"!!

[Tina Kline]

This is a very beautiful love poem.
Great job on writing this sonnet.
It reads perfectly on love, how we see
the other person we love as our whole
wide world, as our everything.