Yours to Frame

This isn't my best work...

 

I feel like I can be me with you

So I’m going be real with you

My eyes linger upon your face

And your eyes penetrate my defense

Your power over me is stronger than a steel-laced mace

It’s so hard to retract my stare

My attempt to convey my feelings is my flair

It’s amazing how your look is the semblance of an angel

Writing down my thoughts is a necessity, otherwise it would strangle

Constrict my lungs, fill them with less-favorable air

Because you are like oxygen, I can only breathe when you are there

My world without you is Earth without the Sun

My life without you is a fire, but no flame

My present and my future is yours to frame

You control my heart, you control this tale

All that’s left is to see if I succeed

Or if my attempts will amount to an epic fail…

Reviews

[Sarah]

maybe not your best but i still freakin love it

[Joanna Maharis]

I like the line, "My present and my future is yours to frame," in that it is so very beautiful. The connection between the narrator and the readers is strong, and the narrator's feelings run so deep. Some beautiful work here.

[Sarah]

AMAZING HEFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tina Kline]

This is very good.
The power that love and desire
have over us, it can be the world.

Like this.

[Sarah]

its good. but it still makes me sad. did you send this one to me cuz i dont remember :(