The Binding of my Prison is Friendship and Fear of Losing That is the Composition of These Bars

Hey best friend, there's somethin I need to confess

It's time to finally life this weight off my chest

But the heartbeat between my thoughts blindly leads to you

I don't expect you to reciprocate these feelings, but I need you to know every word I speak is true

All I need is you in my life

You just need to continue being my friend, I don't need a wife

It's hard to know what to tell

But when our eyes meet, even for the briefest of seconds, it's like our minds gel

As if we were closer than we actually are

But the binding of my prison is friendship and fear of losing that is the composition of these bars

It's impossible to know what I should say

Damn, there's the bell...time for us to go our seperate ways

Reviews

[Sarah]

ahh...i remember when we were just best friends lol

[Sarah]

put this one in the book too

[Sarah]

ummmm so you sent this too me one night and i have it locked on my phone cuz its just awesome lol and i have like 5 of your other poems locked on my phone and i'm totaly sitting right behind you in advisory typing this but i totally love IT! its amamzing! GO HEFF!

[Pen Draggin']

I feel like there is a lot more to this poem than is being shown. I think that if you review it and ponder it, more fluid and eloquent words will fall into place. It is a wonderful start and I would love to see it blossom into the fabulous piece it is.

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here
Enjoyable read here.

[Sexychick11]

I love this piece