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I started to write this and kinda gave up...

your voice is a melody in my head
when im around ya its like my skin shed
i can be me wit you
so imma be real witchu
i dont think your beautiful i think your beyond it
its like everything else is a little bit less important now
its even hard to concentrate now...
 

Reviews

[Sarah]

shortys like a melody in my head!! lol thats what i t reminded me of

[Sexychick11]

This piece has some humor, but is still great. As I am sure you are aware of, there is grammer mistakes, but it appears there was no attempt to maintaining any sense of grammer at all. Great job!

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and sincere
well written and beuatiful

[Jennifer Rebecca Whitmi..]

lol. i like this.