What Is It?

Parallelism

What is it?
What makes me fall in love with her everyday?
What makes her different than all the rest in every way?
What is it that makes me wait around all day?

 

It's not just one thing...
It's everything
It's the way her eyes penetrate directly to my soul
It's the way her smile lights up the room
It's the way the light hits her hair and makes her look like my guardian angel
It's the way she's always in my mind
It's the way all her "flaws" make her perfect
It's the way she makes everything better no matter what
It's the way when she touches my hand I never want to let go
It's because she's the most amazing and beautiful girl ever
It's the way she makes me want to protect her...cause she's Earth's most valuable treasure

 

I wish I was a ring, so I'd always be touching her hand
I wish I was a rail, so I could support her if she stumbles
I wish she could see herself through my eyes, so she could see how special she is and these aren't lies...

Author's Note

I was about 2 months away from turning 16

Reviews

[Sarah]

its good....

[Sexychick11]

This is amazing! I love it! Such joy and an amazing example of paralellism!