I Tried

I Tried

A Poem by Robert Luna
"

Just something

"

 

 

There

where echoes become silence

I tried

But the perfect words

could never pass my lips

Felt every ounce of me screaming out

Silence was all I could speak

but I tried

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gaining a new perspective

The entanglement of silence

Translations of a language

you don’t understand

My heart’s yours for the taking

but silence was all I could speak

Even though I tried

© 2008 Robert Luna


Author's Note

Robert Luna
just something

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A lovely write! It contains more depth than you probably think.

Silence can be worth gold, but it can also when kept at the wrong moment destroy so much.
Sometimes silence says more than words, but sometimes it means the end of everything, and it is for sure more powerful than all words will ever be.
There are moments when a loved one passed away we realise that there was so much we'd like the one to know, that we had told 'em but haven't because words failed us to come, or because of an ever hectic schedule - whatever it's those moments that weigh very much on our soul - but things happen always the way they are meant to be ...

Short but powerful write. It is very thought provoking. I like it!


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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A lovely write! It contains more depth than you probably think.

Silence can be worth gold, but it can also when kept at the wrong moment destroy so much.
Sometimes silence says more than words, but sometimes it means the end of everything, and it is for sure more powerful than all words will ever be.
There are moments when a loved one passed away we realise that there was so much we'd like the one to know, that we had told 'em but haven't because words failed us to come, or because of an ever hectic schedule - whatever it's those moments that weigh very much on our soul - but things happen always the way they are meant to be ...

Short but powerful write. It is very thought provoking. I like it!


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very powerful words in a short piece... sometimes the hardest words to say are the ones that mean the most... not only can you not take back words you say but you can't take back what you didn't say... another fine write my friend.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Robert. I write therefore I feel I am. My words come from my heart, soul, and mind. I write what I feel and see, life is my inspiration. Life itself is art in its purest form. There is noth.. more..

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