Articulated Spiritual Masturbation

Articulated Spiritual Masturbation

A Poem by Robert Luna
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Older piece brought back for a contest. Hope you enjoy.

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Articulated spiritual masturbation
Underlining self-mutilation
Ripping flesh, tearing skin
Injecting a poison deep within

Hibernating soul awakens
Defying what is sin
Permanent staining skin
As needles become electrified

With stencil applied
God’s perfect creation
Enhanced
Beautified

Ritual body modifications
Human interpretations
Art, love, and life
Illustrated by designs

Pleasure and pain coexist
In an intoxicating bliss
Hypnotic hums
Coming from
A hand held machinegun

Ink forcefully penetrates

Quivering flesh

Capturing of life

Upon human skin

 

Here my psyche
Is cleared
I am tranquil
I am whole

I am at home

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tattoo for moments in life

Tattoo for the art

Tattoo for love ones

Don’t tattoo just because

© 2008 Robert Luna


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Robert Luna
Older piece brought back for a contest. Hope you enjoy.

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You captured all the wonders I wonder about tattootilation....tongue in cheek word sneak there, I swear !!

Although I don't catch much TV, I am utterly facinated by the show Inked...I look at tattoo mags at the bookstore and am intensely facinated by the art and the ritual of tattooing. I am convinced there's so much more to it than the trend or the beauty or the beast, to say the least. It leaves me wanting to know more. I'm sure it's been done, but if I were a photographer and could sell the idea, I'd do one of those coffee table books of tattoos accompanied by exposes of their owners and creators....

Very nice work !!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I did not read this before .. Tattoos .. many don't understand .. some hate them.. i like them .. i have one .. never got around to the second one ... it was not painful.. just in the middle of the tattooing it came to me, this is going to be on me and with me and never wash away .. i sort of tensed .. thought and relaxed.

Articulated spiritual masturbation
Underlining self-mutilation
Ripping flesh, tearing skin
Injecting a poison deep within

Hibernating soul awakens
Defying what is sin
Permanent staining skin
As needles become electrified

Have to say that is powerful writing and very visual ..

Chloe
xoxo



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You captured all the wonders I wonder about tattootilation....tongue in cheek word sneak there, I swear !!

Although I don't catch much TV, I am utterly facinated by the show Inked...I look at tattoo mags at the bookstore and am intensely facinated by the art and the ritual of tattooing. I am convinced there's so much more to it than the trend or the beauty or the beast, to say the least. It leaves me wanting to know more. I'm sure it's been done, but if I were a photographer and could sell the idea, I'd do one of those coffee table books of tattoos accompanied by exposes of their owners and creators....

Very nice work !!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Great description of the art. You covered all the bases eloquently. I have yet to tattoo, but I want to. Someday soon.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

it speaks clearly and yet has a surreal feel to it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Interesting title for it. But I enjoyed this piece. makes me wonder about those guys that tattoo their whole body. Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I'm rather speechless after this write. Wow ... it's awesome. There is so much depth in your lines and so much to be pulled from your words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

You know I enjoyed it thoroughly......nice flow and meter...

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Love to see the older, remembered words. Glad it's back.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 5 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Robert. I write therefore I feel I am. My words come from my heart, soul, and mind. I write what I feel and see, life is my inspiration. Life itself is art in its purest form. There is noth.. more..

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