I have to have you

My burning desires brought to light

My mind is numbed
all my thought consumed with you
�I have to have you� is all I can think
Betraying this union I am in
But your alluring beauty
fills my every waking dream
I don�t even know your name
You haven�t whispered it in my ear
as lover�s so often to do
I passed you on the street
There I am left to just watch you pass me by
Pretending to not notice my longing stares
I dream of journeys through life we could share
The unknown path we would discover
A bond of our souls
I have hungered for your touch
your smell, Oh my mind racing
heart beating faster than a drum
I have to have you is all I can think
I know I am with another
and you may have belonged to another
That doesn�t matter
It�s what we could have together

I found a photo of you on the internet
I stare at your every curve
Seeing you topless
sends my thoughts to the wind
What will it take to make you mine
I need you to make me feel complete
My little 4X4 Jeep

Author's Note

Just having some fun

Reviews

[Annalisa]

O.O.....lol, this was hilarious. But I gatta saw, Jeeps are nice but have nothing on a good old Chevy truck *shakes head in disappointment* oh well. Anyway, this was a lot of fun, I did see one typo though you need to change you to your in the line "I stare at you every curve", but other than that magnifico! ^^

[shadadakiya]

Glitter Graphics & Comments

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

LOL, man Robert this was too much of a riot, damn near split my side reading it. oh it's great to inject some humor in our work every once in a while. A Big Smile lights up my face.

[EnterUSerName]

Gosh... its great :)

Heh...
Love it. Made me smile.

[Tamme]

I've come to learn Jeep people are a breed all their own. LOL anyway awesome writing. The only thing is this line:

sends my though to the wind

I think there's something wrong.

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I was like wow this is some girl and then it was a jeep. WTF? I never heard someone talk so loving about a car. Its good I like it.

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

lol i love this..i love the fact that you made it sound so seductive..your descriptions were priceless and on point..i was certainly not expecting all these beautiful inticing words to be for a jeep but thats the beauty of good poetry..lol theres always a twist at the end..it seems like you had fun writing and i certainly had fun reading it..lol..I enjoyed the read..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...ALways Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Hilarious! I love a story with a switch at the end. Wonderfully done.

[Angel Bird]

;o) :o) ;o)

Well - you nicely got me here!!! I'm still laughing about the way you mislead me! Great job - Mister!!!

You couldn't do better would the object of your desire be a woman. Another beautiful write of yours. It flows so well, and it is filled with exquisite and excellent parts. I love it!

A favorite!

Thanks for the smile you brought to my face.

[E. M. Murren]

LMFAO What a treat!!! that curve ball at the end was brilliant. This wonderfully seductive work from a man to a motor vehicle of any sort just brings out the giggles in me. Always fun to read you in ... well any mood... but a silly mood brightens up a cloudy morning. Happy weekend.