I have to have you

My burning desires brought to light

My mind is numbed
all my thought consumed with you
�I have to have you� is all I can think
Betraying this union I am in
But your alluring beauty
fills my every waking dream
I don�t even know your name
You haven�t whispered it in my ear
as lover�s so often to do
I passed you on the street
There I am left to just watch you pass me by
Pretending to not notice my longing stares
I dream of journeys through life we could share
The unknown path we would discover
A bond of our souls
I have hungered for your touch
your smell, Oh my mind racing
heart beating faster than a drum
I have to have you is all I can think
I know I am with another
and you may have belonged to another
That doesn�t matter
It�s what we could have together

I found a photo of you on the internet
I stare at your every curve
Seeing you topless
sends my thoughts to the wind
What will it take to make you mine
I need you to make me feel complete
My little 4X4 Jeep

Author's Note

Just having some fun

Reviews

[Annalisa]

O.O.....lol, this was hilarious. But I gatta saw, Jeeps are nice but have nothing on a good old Chevy truck *shakes head in disappointment* oh well. Anyway, this was a lot of fun, I did see one typo though you need to change you to your in the line "I stare at you every curve", but other than that magnifico! ^^

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

I have a Jeep just like that, only black. She is a beauty. This is a fun piece.

[Petey]

Your sense of humor is out of control here.

[Collie]

You are just to funny. I laughed pretty hard about this one.

[An Ordinary Woman]

LOL Robert, u silly this was great and I have to ask- did you get what you wanted yet? This is really great and made me smile. How fun .... :+))

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Haha.. i was going, what!?! lol
This is great and fun .. i was very surprised .. almost like O. Henry with the end twist..

Chloe
xoxo

Imagining a jeep topless is priceless!

[Brianna Brie]

lol I thought I was finally going to get to read a poem about love that you wrote. Very creative write!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

LOL. Even when your being funny it still ends up a great write. This reminds me of my love for a Ford Mustang I've wanted since I was 15 yrs old. I think this piece is a lot like my feelings. haha

[Emily B]

aw, damnit, Robert! I was all set for this racy, passionate affair. My heart skipped a little and then I saw the jeep. Good one!

[Brenda Sue]

I love this, it is just like a man to use more romantic terms about a vehicle than about a woman......LOL Wonderfully penned. A very good read.

[dawnmarie]

heheheheheheheheheh that is all i can say... i once as a kid wrote about a vet .... i loved those cars when i was younger ... but oh this was awesome.. never saw a jeep coming heheheheheh