I have to have you

My burning desires brought to light

My mind is numbed
all my thought consumed with you
�I have to have you� is all I can think
Betraying this union I am in
But your alluring beauty
fills my every waking dream
I don�t even know your name
You haven�t whispered it in my ear
as lover�s so often to do
I passed you on the street
There I am left to just watch you pass me by
Pretending to not notice my longing stares
I dream of journeys through life we could share
The unknown path we would discover
A bond of our souls
I have hungered for your touch
your smell, Oh my mind racing
heart beating faster than a drum
I have to have you is all I can think
I know I am with another
and you may have belonged to another
That doesn�t matter
It�s what we could have together

I found a photo of you on the internet
I stare at your every curve
Seeing you topless
sends my thoughts to the wind
What will it take to make you mine
I need you to make me feel complete
My little 4X4 Jeep

Author's Note

Just having some fun

Reviews

[Annalisa]

O.O.....lol, this was hilarious. But I gatta saw, Jeeps are nice but have nothing on a good old Chevy truck *shakes head in disappointment* oh well. Anyway, this was a lot of fun, I did see one typo though you need to change you to your in the line "I stare at you every curve", but other than that magnifico! ^^

[lb]

Didn't expect the ending
Nicely done w/ the whole thing`n yes I must agree
A jeep is a must have for anyone!
I am on the look out for mine as well, nicely done

[Caitbabie008]

Good write! :)

[deadlife]

Hey..you got me jealous dear..lol. :)
i do feel the same way every time i see a jeep.. And you gave these feelings, words! Beautiful.
Her smell..yeah.. I'd love to die while taking a deep breath filled with her crisp odour.. I'd love to!
Your writing got me high..Man..i just can't wait now!
Yeah..but i know i need to work to get her..but still it's not that bad to live a little fantasy!
Nice dear..very very nice.
Thanks for it.
May you get her very soon.. I'll also..one day. :)
blessings...

[None]

And the music in the background is turned up loudly, it's "Queen," 'I'm in Love With My Car." Your writing is so precious. You had me going and I was wondering who your love could be. You should get with Jeep and see if they can give you a two page ad. The first page your poem..the second the picture!
Wonderfully fun and a great write!

[Ladysue]

Robert, this was great and so much fun. I was a little confused at first, but what a great ending! Very amusing and entertaining. You never cease to amaze me!!!

[ELii]

Lovely fun indeed. I really liked this write with surprising twist at the end. Made me laugh. Nice 1.

[Lucinda Bogart]

Jeeper Jeeper pants on fire !! Longing for the view through the mudlaced windscreen and feel of the mudpacked lugged tires as they slide on the pillows of mud hugged between the lugs....Oh the sweet life of the Jeeper...

[Mizu No Mita]

wow... nice twist at the end. I thought it was about a girl then "My little 4X4 Jeep"
It's just like "Dot Dot Dot. ooooookie...."
Keep writing, just for fun, just to let go, just because


~Mita

[Legion]

Lots of fun apparently. :) Good piece though.