Shadow

The light of the moon casts a shadow on my life. A shadow of truth and darkness, hope and loss. No light shall enter, no angel shall pass. This mortality's a lie, humanity a curse. Your life will be taken, your soul will freed, no life will be spared and no soul will die. The shadow will protect you, be a home to your soul. Immortality shall be your blessing, humanity will die and all will be happy in the dark of the moon.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

No light shall enter
no angel shall pass.
Nice write.

[Jeanelle]

thank you very much =)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Chris]

Normal and social niceities don't fit. But I listened.

[TheAdamBryant]

my applause , short and nice poem