My Newly Broken Heart

You've ripped my heart out torn it to shreds, then burned all the remaining peices to ash.

But I still love you regardless.

I know you did it for good intentions.

But it still hurt me, under these conditions.

But I'm sending you these ashes, with you over seas, in hopes, you'll always love me.

The years will pass but my love will never fade.

Even in this heartless chest, so recently made.

I'll never forget you, cause I already think about you, every second of everyday.

Goodbye my love.

I hope I will see you again, in a time that seems so far away.

Though I'll see you in every face.

So for now, goodbye, my angle, that has kept me sane.

Reviews

[Shellie]

Its honest and not filled with cliche which I admire in writing, real emotion. Obviously adding to writing is a good combination but this was just right without it and true esp the part that says about seeing this person in every face. Nice!