First Love

Love

The first time I saw you,
My world go round.
Because of your existence,
My life turns into a hunting ground.

But the moment you distant,
My heaven turns to torment.
Now, without of your extant,
I’ll be better like flat.

I feel like I’m an equation,
That can never be likened.
Neither be factored nor expand,
Because of my numbers can’t be found.
  
You’re like a seraph,
That lives in my reverie.
To neither be caress nor perceive.
All I can do is to stir in my fantasy.
  
I know you can’t ever be with me,
And maybe I’ll be seemed like a fool.
But I’ll still ardor you,
‘Coz you’re my bliss and my vitality.

Reviews

[lostnstars]

wow I really loved this poem! i loved on how you flow them all out beautifully and I'm in love with the fourth stanza, it's perfect.

[simpleromantic]

Thank you.