Yes, indeed. You've nailed it. If only we knew how many disbelievers have a change of heart when their car stalls on the railroad tracks. (Most, I imagine) This poem says something substantial, which I like.
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There is a saying that there are no atheists in foxholes. We didn't have foxholes in the Navy so tha.. read moreThere is a saying that there are no atheists in foxholes. We didn't have foxholes in the Navy so that point is anecdotal. Personally, I'm a grateful believer in Jesus Christ, but I imagine that all believers have had doubts at some point in their lives.
I am a lifelong poet who is now trying to write a book (read Silent House). I'd appreciate input on the excerpt from the book.
Also comments always welcome for my poetry.
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