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Constant conflicts souring like the sea, 

rapids and tides washing every bit of me. 

A story that was once told, 

now neglected and discarded. 

My river run dry 

a valley of stone a heart that beats rigid, 

a voice that is timid lacking sound and skin 

that mimics bone - cold and 

hard to touch.

Ive been through it, and no one 

seem to care, I've been through it 

and I don't even

know why

I'm still here.

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Very well written has good balance now

[Jaybam]

Thank you. After reading it through i see what you mean with the balancing of each verse. It did make it difficult to read. Im going to change it up, let me know what you think afterwards if you have the time.
Thanks again.

[W R Stowe]

I had to read it a few times because you have balanced the length of your verses rather thal keeping them in one line and your here for a purpose its no accident stay at it.The message was good though

[Jaybam]

Sorry so long i have been on hiatus for some time now. Thank you so much for you honesty in your comment...