MY TURN

A WINDY WHISTLE 

LEAD TO AND EARLY 

DISMISSAL, AS I FELT 

THE COLD UP MY SPINE 

AND THE CRACKEL  IN 

MY KNEES. I WAS LOST 

IN THE MOMENT. TERAS 

STOOD STILL ON MY 

FACE, AS I SAW 

EVERYTHING AROUND 

ME, BUT DIDNT HEAR A 

WORD, NOR SEE THE 

LEAVES MOVE ON THE

TREES. IT WAS MY LAST  

BREATH AS WELL AS MY 

FIRST. IT WAS MY 

FREEDOM FROM LIFE 

AND ALL THAT IT WAS 

WORTH.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

"It was my last breath as well as my first" sick and creative way to put words together. I like how you used all caps, gives it a strong look. well done man.

[Jaybam]

Thank you so much man. Ive only been on this site for a week, your the first comment post I got so I def appreciate the feed back..

[Rob Santana]

No prob man. Gonna check out more of your work tonight after work with a cold beer in ma hand, haha