Rush hour

Rush hour

A Poem by Jazz
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Another attempt at a haiku.

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Shadows dance under
Fire on the horizon:
The suit-clad rush home.

© 2011 Jazz


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Jazz
In my seminar group, the tutor told us to observe a scene for 15 minutes and then write three haikus about what we have seen. I chose the street below my block flats at sunset.

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I am not typically a connoisseur of Haikus, but this one seemed nearly perfect (according to my limited knowledge. I very much enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked it!!
Fire on the horizon - Nice metaphor

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Jazz
Jazz

Lincoln, Lincolnshire, United Kingdom



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Hello! My name's Jazz. I'm 19 and I'm studying English Literature and Creative Writing at university. I mainly write poetry and short stories. I'm influenced by writers such as Emily Bronte, Charl.. more..

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