Spit it, Spirit

Spit it, Spirit

A Poem by Jazmen

welcome to the spiritual dimension of a heathen,
To the soil I say hello

And to the wind - and the dry frost swirling -
I am weightless in sound energy - for in the air I blow


And scalding tears awaken me, my consciousness replanted,
like a spark within a deformed seed, cracked yet still enchanted.


Hear me heathens; here’s

An ode to all the sweet revelry; to laughter and my lover:
I bid a portrait of a heaven to believe in you and no other


Seeking the brightness to keep me alive
Singing a chora until the day we all die.

I've found the brilliance I sought to find
A permanence of grand harmony derived..

Remind me now of illness and goodness

colliding in duality







Beauty in totality.

© 2013 Jazmen


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Very distinctive, profound, deep and wittingly triumphant. A poem with commanding presence in light of a concrete message surrounded by astounding diction. Great work. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is like spoken word brilliance, I'd clap to this, it's somewhat bizarre though in its harmonies.

Posted 11 Years Ago


great piece jazmen
stunningly evocative
connection well made

Posted 11 Years Ago


amazing write, close to my "beliefs"...i am pagan.....and that last line was one hell of a drop. very nice attention getter!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jazmen

11 Years Ago

thanks! this one is special cause it was written when I was first attempting to hone my lovely conce.. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

awesome write, awesome subject, well done!
amazing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Incredible write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Remarkable and as you say, soulful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was very unique...I'm glad I stopped by to check this out. They rhyming sequence...flows beautifully. The imagery is lovely. It did bring comfort to read this...like soul food it was a very satisfying read. :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


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...
. stunning ...
. absolutely stunning work ...
. i love every word and every line ...
. and, i agree with your perspective ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...... i have no other words right now just wow..... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on June 7, 2012
Last Updated on January 11, 2013
Tags: heathen, God, earth, soil, trees, forest, northern, enchant, beauty, spirit, spiritual, prayer, bright, positive, love, nature, being

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Jazmen
Jazmen

Pacific Northwest, WA



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Studying Science and Philosophy Claim no religion and I have no categorizable political views. I am interested mostly in the new science sociocyberneering (The Venus Project + Jacque Fresco) .. more..

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