To Whom It May Concern; Life Is All What You See It

It is more like a short inspirational letter to whom needs it and a short practice of demonstration of my abilities as a writer.

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Life’s All What You See It

By: Jasmine Berry

 

To Whom It May Concern:

Every patient that walks into my door they expect me to help fix their issue make it disappears. Yet what they don’t realize is they didn’t come to see me for them to have their problems go away, I am here to give them the tools they need to live their lives and combat those problems. Counseling it is hard because of the different issues people have and diagnosing is not as easy as it sounds. People expect to have black and white answers, yet life all it is different shades of color. Those colors aren’t pure colors they are mixed into other colors which, by the way, was mixed in with other colors and so forth. And then what makes it more elusive there is more than mixture to make those certain colors.

As you can conclude a lifestyle of an INFJ is tiresome not difficult. Still I feel like I could do my job to make their lives be more suitable. I dispense how other just sends them off to the next person, just talking, or giving them failing medications; treating each disorder the same way. It sickens and fills in my stomach. They should interact with different patients with the same issues teach them things and help them realize the reasons to live. Counseling is kind of like coaching, inspiring people to move forward and help them discover who they are. Counseling shouldn’t be a routine it should be inspirational. My life and the way I see it will change everything forever

 

Sincerely Inspirational,

 

Ms. Jasmine Berry

 

Author's Note

Please use creative criticism while reviewing my piece. I will try to reply as much as I can and read your writings as well and review them.

Reviews

[sherni]

I like how you illuminate on how tough it is to council, and explain the expectations that patients have from those from whom they seek advise. However, I think you could definitely elaborate and add more content. Your last line about changing everything forever could serve as an introduction to a new paragraph where you explain how you PERSONALLY would change it, or how you think everything would change if those councillors adapted to how you've advised.

Overall I think it's really amazing! I've never consciously thought about how the councillors must feel when patients expect them to make everything better, so thank you for writing this!

[Jazzy]

Thank you, I found your advise really constructive. I admit i have always had issues with details, and when i wrote this I was under the influence of my emotions. I thought about an issue beyond an issue, and boom it was in a writing frenzy. Lol and I will review your writing as soon as i can. :)

[Jazzy]

Thank you i will be sure to review your work as well. Let me tell you about this piece it did start out as a story but after thinking i should step back a little and get more practice before i write a story. So I turned it into an inspirational letter for the time being.

[Silver~]

I really enjoyed reading this,and I like the style in which you wrote as well as the title. At this moment in time I can't find anything really to critique and i'll be sure to read more of your work!