deed

i sang in my head,

to be remembered,

for what i gave and got

and tales to be told

of what i saw and sought

and hoped to be spoke about 

how i loved and laughed,

and maybe for the things i fought and caught.

But not for what I lost,

and not for how im gone 

not for how im gone.

Author's Note

how do i improve this

Reviews

[Soren]

Indeed so true I too want to be remembered for happiness and good times for living life to the fullest not teary sadness. Nicely said

[Jayz._>hollow]

thank you that means a lot