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A Poem by Jayz._>hollow

           What does it mean to be human?
       To be human is it to be Free?              
To be human is it to be loved?            
To be human is it to be held?             
Or To be human is it to be.........be.     

© 2024 Jayz._>hollow


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Jayz._>hollow
What do you think guys and where can i improve on my writing.

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The ellipsis at the end ("Or To be human is it to be.........be.") leaves room for interpretation, perhaps implying that being human encompasses simply existing or being oneself. It invites reflection on the complexities and different dimensions of human experience and identity. I enjoyed it thanks for sharing this piece.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jayz._>hollow

2 Months Ago

Thank you for giving it a read ink:)



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Posted 2 Months Ago


The ellipsis at the end ("Or To be human is it to be.........be.") leaves room for interpretation, perhaps implying that being human encompasses simply existing or being oneself. It invites reflection on the complexities and different dimensions of human experience and identity. I enjoyed it thanks for sharing this piece.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jayz._>hollow

2 Months Ago

Thank you for giving it a read ink:)
This was nice. I believe that individuality is the only freedom; that love is hard work, responsibility and sacrifice and that it is wonderful to be held so long as we are not being held back or held down. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, some would say "I think therefore I am" which seems to have a kind of similar vibe to what you're saying here. It is very hard to nail down and articulate exactly what being human means and how to define it. It's a little thing, but I think my favorite part was probably the title. Just using punctuation as a title isn't something I think I've seen before. It definitely got my attention and made me want to see what was up.
The only thing I would say is the formatting is a little interesting. I don't know if that might have happened when you transferred it to this site but everything seems to be aligned a little unusually.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jayz._>hollow

2 Months Ago

Thank you, green but the formatting was intentional. Hope you liked it. :)

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Added on June 25, 2024
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Vellore , India



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