...The End.

...The End.

A Poem by Jeanice montanez
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short poem about heartbreak

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Its gotten so bad that I dream about you,
I wake up and I feel like I can't breathe without you,
My mind is so lost I know I can't be without you,
So why do you insist I be seen without you? (copyright Jeanice Montanez) 


                                                

© 2018 Jeanice montanez


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To experience such a painful intent can cause many a sleepless night. When you're willing to give all of your being to him and yet, the response is so disappointing, it can cause a rip in the lining of your future decisions. Not only about him but guys in general.

To love in your young years is often disheartening. This, unfortunately, is a part of life many have and must experience.

Welcome to WC, Jeanice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Heartbrokeness is so real for so many of us. Nicely written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


To experience such a painful intent can cause many a sleepless night. When you're willing to give all of your being to him and yet, the response is so disappointing, it can cause a rip in the lining of your future decisions. Not only about him but guys in general.

To love in your young years is often disheartening. This, unfortunately, is a part of life many have and must experience.

Welcome to WC, Jeanice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 14, 2018
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Jeanice montanez
Jeanice montanez

naples, FL



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I am a teenager from a background that is full of pain suffering and abuse, i am a new writer and i write poems. im looking for the good in this messed up world and writing is how i get through a lot .. more..

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