Vegitative Perception

Nature is everything.

My mind can not escape this,

There's something going wrong,

In times of pure frustration

Senseless, brutal savage brawls.

 

How could you not guess?

How can't you be wrong?

As nothing exists here

Whats worth holding on?

 

Crushing realization,

You are all alone,

Life is a creation,

Of eyes and mind and soul.

 

Buried in your own restrictions,

Are you really in control?

Can you rule, or change perceptions?

Would you even care to know?

 

Some wont mind to be relinquished

But of course some will push on.

Some of us are bold, determined.

We will fight and stand our ground.

 

Of course violence will not answer

Never really solved a thing.

We'll be laughed at, turned to cinder

They might smile, give a wink

 

Lets just leave it to be figured

Lets just sit and stay a span

We'll observe, the changing planet

Live and love, enjoy the land.

 

So what really is the answer?

Talking to this plant of mine

Joyously singing politely

Slowly growing, defeating time.

  

 

Reviews

[Dizzy]

omg its brilliant. your brilliant. Such a wonderful poet.

[Aiza]

[Life is a creation,
Of eyes and mind and soul]


i love that ^^^
i really enjoy reading your work, it's very inspirational and i look forward to reading more =]
great job

[Starting Over]

Beautiful! All the can beside... took my breathe away!

[deeps]

So what really is the answer?
Talking to this plant of mine
Joyously singing politely
Slowly growing, defeating time.

I like this stanza here, This is a very well written write here. I like this

[Legion]

Yes it is. Well said.