A Thinker

Think, Think, Think. ~Winnie The Pooh

 

 

 

 

 

Your mind has changed...

Hey there lazy thinker,

With that sly smirk on your lips.

What is it in that head of yours,

That makes your ticker tick?

Its not your own...

Day dreaming like always

Creative sparks exploding

Brand new ideas erupting

Entertaining and enlightening

Is that genius in there?

Should i look inside your ear?

Will i see an incredible world?

With millions of people doing wonderful things.

Now it Begins...

Will i see a machine?

A robotic mainframe circuitry.

If i tap your skull, will it ping?

If i look inside will you bleed?

You will unfold...

Millions of tiny flying spiders.

Crawling out of every pore

Fly away from you

As you laugh at the tickles

You're loosing that ability...

Your mind is leaking, fusing, tweaking

Its changing our reality

All the things that you've been thinking

Are no longer fantasy.

Here come the demons

That you've created

Pushing their way through

To Think...

From your mouth

The words you've said

Vomit out upon the world

Pouring into existence

All that's cruel and pure.

Everything you made believe...

All those horrors you imagined

All those deaths and more

Murder by your own hand

Killing, thoughts of gore

There's a bright side to of course

There's the sex and porn

Every dirty fantasy

With every dirty girl

Has become diseased...

You thought way to much ya know

And all thoughts might come true

From births to deaths, love and sex

The thought of killing you

Ideas never fade...

This passed through are thinkers mind

He conceived his own demise

He collapsed and just in time

Erased his thoughts with suicide.

Creative ones just go extinct...

 

Author's Note

slightly revised...pay attention to the bold....not that i really have to mention that being it is bold... but ya know....

Reviews

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this is an amazing piece. The descriptions are fantastic and I totally love this poem. Awesome job!!!

Heather

[Somebody you've already..]

wow this was absolutly amazing. i loved reading it. you are an awesome writer very creative and i loved the images i got in my mind. It was so intense and creative i really didnt notice the typos. great write :)

[deer-heart]

Intense poem, very intriguing... reading gave me the sensation of being drawn inside a human brain, crawling around inside and seeing everything going on inside. The narration gets darker and more twisted... as I said, intense. Excellent imagery, excellent delivery. Fix up some grammatical errors and you've got yourself an incredible piece of writing.

[Pax Analog]

Fix 'em; the typos.

Otherwise, engagingly surreal, striking range of details. One would often like to peer inside any number of skull-caves, that seething mass of intrigue, contradictions, and flashes of insight.

I get the impression reading this intriguing poem, that the thinker has simply run ahead of nature, which as mortality, is stalking, so what the hell, let's get it over with; the logic of suicide.

"Creative ones just go extinct. . ."

Darkly droll poem; sardonic wit.

[Butterflymom]

I found this to be very intense, and powerful. Very well written, creative, and emotional.

[Legion]

A very interesting transition. I found it a twisted read but enjoyable. Kudos to you.

[Exa Lectric]

That was amazing. I cannot believe someone could write such a poem. Simply amazing.

[CourtNny]

Holy s**t. All I am going to say is that I am not worthy. Amazing write my fellow...amazing write.