Muse

inspire someone....

I want to be origami
Fold me, to be what you want
I'll be a colorful sculpture
Mold me, transform me to art

I'll be a statue of ice
Slowly fading by day
A once in a lifetime occurence
Here and then taken away

I'll be the words of a lyric
Beautifuly sung in the air
I'll be the model of portraits
Smiling at people that stare

I will inspire, enlighten, concieve
Fascinate, stumble, make them believe...
Now I must ask you,
What should I be?

Reviews

[Dan Bullock]

Stunning and so simple! The first line drags you in absolute and then it moves on through flowing words of the olde Muse-like intensity!

Captured here in words for men and women everywhere, excellent, fantastic work!! :D

[deer-heart]

very effective in all regards: imagery, expression, concept, flow, rhyme... I really don't think there's anything you could improve on or alter here. It's a concept that most people can relate to, and you illustrate it very well.

[Fear Corrupts!]

Hmm,
I would say that the majority of teenagers out there could very easily relate to this...
This is a topic that you like to write about often, I'm finding, and you seem to cover something a little new & different in each piece of work, regarding the same matter?
This is good,
you don't repeat yourself, you don't go stale, you deliver a good message clearly.

[Somebody you've already..]

holds a deeper meaning, but at the same time still expresses how you feel.