Fade Away

laying in bed in the darkness..

Starring into the darkness...
Once again.
I watch the world fall away,
While every thought keeps me awake...
A little longer.
I fade away into the distance
Everything dissolving all around me
And I'm alone again
Surrounded by nothingness
Floating into another world...
Another dream.
Every thought astounding...
Everyones around me...
And i close my eyes
Whisper my words
Lie down
and fade away.

Reviews

[Arly Parent]

not bad
i think it could flow a little better
but thats just me
constructive criticism and whatnot