Meditation

Listening to the loquacious spirit

that works endlessly to make sense of my world

the tantric nature of silent chanting

which only my heart can hear

 

Darkness looms outside the sanctuary I’ve created

yet my eyes do not tire

yet my mouth does not yawn

yet my mind consolidates all attention to the voice

 

To the voice every second is a critical juncture

which must be utilised with zero hesitation

 

Fear is for the fearful

Fear is for those who see with eyes that are only opened

Fear is for those who are frightful of the unruly

 

The voice has whatever name is assigned

But Grace soothes my mind with effortless ease   

Reviews

[captain]

silent beauty...nice!!!!

[Emilie Barn]

I'm agreed with many reviewers. It's kind of relaxing and meditative. Great job, keep it up =))

[TheSweet]

How relaxing. It's quite strange that the music I have on is a piano piece that somehow works amazingly with this poem. Meditation is very good for the body, so this read is something I can relate to. Thanks for sharing :)

[Brittany]

I didn't get mediative exactly...or maybe mediative to prepare for something dark. I don't know. But I like it and the word choices and flow. Well done.

[Raphh]

I felt very comfortable when reading this piece and the title of this piece is conveyed through the text. It does put its audience (me at least) in a meditative mood.

[Liana]

what can i say..... it was meditative :)

[MoriartyMesa]

Enjoyed the flow, words and over all theme.

[Honey54]

omg these lines grabbed in to a spiritual trance
"Fear is for those who see with eyes that are only opened" and "The voice has whatever name is assigned But Grace soothes my mind with effortless ease" that last line touched me so deeply..I LOVE THIS A FAVORITE FOR ME! :-]

whoa. You had me drawn in from the first verse.. very well written, with an engaging story to tell. Very nicely written :)

[Aehr]

powerful and kinda silent.. that forges the beauty... well done